Comments

I think you have done a good job here of using the features that you found in the original texts that you have studied. You clearly have a good eye for design and made some strong choices of images. Your contents pages are a little too sparse and for future work I'd like you to look even more closely, especially considering font sizes, attention to lines created by space and a simple use of slender lines on the page to draw the eye around. Well done on layout and design task.